What to Do When a Mountain Gorilla Blocks Your Path

This essay, by Tenzing Carvalho, 17, a student at Western Center Academy in Hemet, Calif., is one of the Top 10 winners of The Learning Network’s “How To” Informational Writing Contest.


What to Do When a Mountain Gorilla Blocks Your Path

You’re trekking through Volcanoes National Park in the Virunga Mountains of Rwanda, home to 605 of the world’s remaining 1,063 mountain gorillas. And then — bam. A 400-pound silverback stands in your path, chewing a leaf, staring at you like you owe it money.

First, do not run. Do. Not. Run. According to Volcano’s Head Ranger, Remy E., who has spent years keeping tourists from making bad decisions, “If you run, they chase. And trust me, you won’t win.” Gorillas can hit 25 mph, so unless you’re an Olympic sprinter fueled by terror, just don’t.

Instead, assume a nonthreatening posture. No eye contact, no sudden movements — just slowly squat down like you’re bracing for an awkward family photo.

If a gorilla from one of Volcano’s 14 family groups decides you’re in its way, just let it pass. “Sometimes they’ll brush by like an annoyed commuter in a packed subway,” says Remy. Just accept that you are not the main character here.

The massive guy with a silver-streaked back and “I run this jungle” energy? That’s the alpha male, the silverback. Trust me, you do not want to test him.

Whatever you do, don’t touch the babies. No matter how cute they are when they mess with your shoelaces, resist the urge to engage. A protective silverback will not find it adorable.

Instead, back up slowly, keep calm and — here’s the key — grunt. Gorillas make a deep, friendly rumbling to signal all is well. Take a breath and give it your best Grrr-hmmmph.

That throat-clearing grunt? It’s real gorilla-speak. Translation: “Hey, big guy. No problems here. Just passing through.” If he grunts back, congratulations — you’ve just had a polite conversation with a mountain gorilla.

Do not pound your chest. That’s gorilla for “Let’s fight,” and unless you can bench press a car, you will lose.

If a gorilla mock charges (pounding its chest and sprinting toward you), resist every instinct to scream and run. It’s a bluff. “Flinching is weakness,” Remy says. Hold your ground. Congratulations — you just passed the gorilla’s test.

This encounter only happens because of Rwanda’s decades of conservation efforts. Former poachers are rangers and guides, turning their knowledge into protection instead of hunting. The Dian Fossey Foundation works with the Rwandan government to make eco-tourism sustainable, ensuring both the gorillas and local communities thrive.

So why risk this encounter? Because seeing a wild mountain gorilla is unforgettable. They’re majestic, intelligent and — if you follow the rules — unlikely to make you famous for the wrong reasons.

How to Prepare for a Funeral Portrait

This essay, by Hoseok Jeon, 16, a student at the Korea International School in Seongnam, South Korea, is one of the Top 10 winners of The Learning Network’s “How To” Informational Writing Contest.


How to Prepare for a Funeral Portrait

For someone nearing the end of a full life, taking a funeral portrait doesn’t have to be a somber affair. For Park Young Hoon, an 81-year-old security officer at an apartment complex in Seoul, his funeral portrait session became a pleasant morning spent with his granddaughter. They ate breakfast, walked while listening to birds, and after the shoot, they shared ice cream.

“What most people see as morbid, I saw as another chance to create a memory,” Park says. This way, the funeral portrait transforms from a grim necessity into an everyday activity that happens to become the last image many will see of you. “You could let your memory become merely a formality, or you could turn it into a parting gift,” Park suggests.

First, schedule a date at a photo studio. “Morning appointments work best,” Park advises. “By afternoon, you’ll have experienced so many things that the unusual feeling of taking a funeral portrait disappears,” he explains. Even before the shoot, Park recommends staying active. “Keep yourself occupied and quiet the anxiety your brain is signaling,” he says. “Life limits your choices in many ways: in-laws, height, taxes — the list continues. This portrait lets you reclaim some control over your legacy.”

Choosing appropriate attire comes next. “We should abandon the notion that funeral portraits must be formal,” Park insists. “The image should represent your authentic self. Would it make sense for an avid traveler to wear a suit? Of course not.” He compares life to a novel, noting that “the photo serves as the cover, and that cover remains forever.” Park himself wore his security guard uniform for his portrait. “It’s who I’ve been for 20 years — why pretend otherwise?”

The final step is attending the appointment. Park suggests bringing someone along. “My granddaughter kept making jokes that made me laugh naturally instead of forcing that stiff ‘photograph smile,’” he recalls. “Genuine expressions matter more than practiced poses.”

Taking the portrait is straightforward — follow the photographer’s guidance and remember that authenticity trumps perfection. “A good photograph doesn’t just freeze time,” Park reflects. “It brings back smells and feelings, connecting us to what matters.” We all hope our portraits will remind others of the connections we shared. “So smile,” concludes Park, “not just for the camera, but for the wonderful life you’ve lived.”

How to Find Silence in a Noisy World

This essay, by Gayatri Srivastava, 16, a student at the Dhirubhai Ambani International School in Mumbai, India, is one of the Top 10 winners of The Learning Network’s “How To” Informational Writing Contest.


How to Find Silence in a Noisy World

“Silence isn’t the absence of noise,” says Suraj Mehta, a railway guard at Mumbai’s Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus. “It’s something you carry within you, even as the world rushes past.” Amid the relentless commotion, Mehta has mastered the art of finding quiet. For 23 years, the heavy clang of metal on tracks and the rhythmic rush of thousands of hurried footsteps have composed the constant soundtrack he hears everyday. “If you wait for the world to quiet down — you’ll never hear silence at all. You must create it within yourself.”

Find stillness within before searching for it elsewhere. It’s about space — space between thoughts, between breaths, between the day’s first rays of light and its demands. Silence exists in these in-between moments, waiting to be discovered. To embrace it, begin with your breath. Inhale deeply, feeling the air expand inside you. Exhale slowly, letting the week’s stress dissolve with it. Relax every muscle in your body, from the top of your head to the tip of your toes. “Before the rush begins, I stand on the platform at dawn and listen to the quiet hum of the tracks,” Mehta says. It’s important to take those minutes for yourself, where it’s just you and the gentle stir of thoughts in your mind.

In a world that demands constant attention, it is easy to forget that silence is a choice. “Noise isn’t just what you hear,” Mehta reflects. “It’s everything that pulls you away from yourself.” Once you’ve found that internal quiet, protect it. Resist the impulse to check, scroll and respond to every buzz. Turn off the notifications on your devices and indulge in digital silence, allowing your mind to breathe free from constant distraction.

“Learn to recognize the quiet moments hidden in plain sight,” advises Mehta. These “pockets” of silence may not last long, but they do exist. The early morning hush before the city wakes up, or the quiet stillness before a curtain rises; train yourself to notice these fleeting interludes. “Sometimes, silence may be something you step into.” A quiet park at sunset, an empty library aisle or a secluded garden bench can offer a moment of stillness.

Perhaps the world will never settle; but if you learn to step back from the noise and let it fade into the background — you’ll realize that silence has been there all along, waiting for you to listen.

How to Master the Art of People-Watching

This essay, by Aziz AbdullaZoda, 17, a student at the Pomfret School in Pomfret, Conn., is one of the Top 10 winners of The Learning Network’s “How To” Informational Writing Contest.


How to Master the Art of People-Watching

“I’m not spying. I’m observing,” says Taika Ita, a longtime cafe regular in New York City who has spent years watching the city’s stories unfold from the same corner seat. “People think they’re just passing through, but if you sit in one spot long enough, you start to see patterns: who rushes, who got fired, who’s having a good day.” Observing people becomes a skill and a habit. The beauty of it is in paying attention to the unspoken languages of the city. However, make sure to stay invisible: watching without being watched. There is a fine line between keen observation and making someone uncomfortable.

Step one? Pick the right setting. Go-to spots are airports, subway stations and cafes: places where people exist in motion. A coffee shop in the morning has a different story than one in the evening. “People think cities are chaotic, but they run on a schedule,” Ita explains. “You just have to notice it.”

People’s body language reveals everything about them. A woman sitting alone at a cafe, stirring her coffee without drinking it. A man touching his beard every 30 seconds. “You learn to read moods without words,” Ita says. “Confidence, anxiety, boredom — it’s all there if you pay attention.”

The magic of people-watching isn’t just in noticing — it’s in wondering. Every person is a mystery waiting to be discovered. Why is that guy carrying an unreasonably large bouquet? Is it an apology or a grand romantic gesture? Why does the woman in the subway keep staring at the door? Is she expecting someone or trying to escape? The best people-watchers ask questions, even if they never get the answers. The more one wonders, the better one gets at noticing little things about people.

Writers, artists and even detectives have long used observation to find stories, solve mysteries, and make sense of the world. Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, who created Sherlock Holmes, once wrote, “You see, but you do not observe.” Most people rush through life without really looking at it. But if people slow down and watch, they start to see everything a little differently.

Staring is off-limits, though. The goal isn’t to be intrusive — it’s to appreciate the everyday performances of human nature. Try to take the time to notice the world, one passing stranger at a time.

How to Be a Stargazer

This essay, by Aditya Neil Banerjee, 16, a student at Stanford Online High School, is one of the Top 10 winners of The Learning Network’s “How To” Informational Writing Contest.


How to Be a Stargazer

“People rush to buy telescopes when they want to start stargazing,” says Kalée Tock, a science instructor with seven years of experience in astronomy. “You’re looking through the telescope, and it’s pitch black, you don’t know where you’re pointing in the sky because the field of view is really small.” A lifelong science enthusiast, Tock encourages beginners to start their journey with what they already have: their eyes. Naked-eye observation allows you to view entire constellations, rather than focusing on just one object at a time.

To get the most out of stargazing, start by finding a comfortable, dark spot. Somewhere away from streetlights and porch bulbs. Tock reminds her students, “You’re outside, at night, alone … kind of sketch!” So do bring a friend or family member along with you. But apart from safety, she says, “Just having someone to be there with you and think about those stars together, it enhances the experience.”

Once you’ve settled in, give your eyes time to adjust to the dark. Tock notes, “Students have a real hard time waiting, even for just 15 minutes,” but stargazing isn’t just about looking up, it’s about having the patience to slow down.

But where should you look? Tock suggests starting with easily-recognizable constellations: the “W” of Cassiopeia, and Orion, with his distinctive red shoulder and blue foot. One of her favorite stars is Delta Cephei in the Cepheus constellation, just to the right of Cassiopeia, which she affectionately calls “our class’s pet star.” You can also use star-locating apps to help guide your gaze, but do turn on the red light filter so your night vision stays intact.

If you’re hoping to spot fainter stars or planets, Tock suggests the averted vision technique. Instead of looking directly at the object, look slightly off to the side. Thanks to the more light-sensitive rods in the edges of your eyes, you’ll see it more clearly than if you stare straight at it.

At its core, stargazing is about reconnecting with the timeless sense of curiosity and wonder. “If all you do today is spot Betelgeuse in the night sky, think about the fact that it might have exploded 100 years ago, and you wouldn’t know about it for centuries until the light reaches you. It’s just kind of mind-bending and fun if you think about it.”

How to Survive as a Manchester United Fan

This essay, by Abdur Rahman, 17, a student at Faujdarhat Cadet College in Salimpur, Bangladesh, is one of the Top 10 winners of The Learning Network’s “How To” Informational Writing Contest.


How to Survive as a Manchester United Fan

“Supporting Manchester United is like buying a knockoff jersey with ‘RoonEY10’ stickered at the back,” says Mashrur Rahman Mahir, a 22-year-old from Dhaka, Bangladesh, and a lifelong United devotee. “You know it’s flawed, but you wear it proudly anyway — because therapy’s expensive.” Mahir, whose dorm is plastered with CR7 posters and a “Glazers Out” banner (taped over his ex’s face), embodies United’s holy trinity: hope, delusion and 1 a.m. caffeine shakes. Here’s his ultimate guide on how to survive as a Red Devil.

Start by accepting your irrational love for United — it’s hard-wired in your DNA. “My father supported United because they were kings. I support because I’m a masochist,” Mahir shrugs. “At least we’re consistent. In suffering.” The first rule of survival? Treat every season like a Bollywood plot. There’s drama, tragedy and a guaranteed happy ending … except there’s no happy ending. Just more drama. And Antony spinning.

Dhaka adds its own spice to the misery. Imagine a 1 a.m. kickoff against Burnley, only for the power to die in the 89th minute. “God’s mercy,” Mahir laughs. “He’s sparing us another collapse.” To cope, Dhaka’s fans spin delusion into optimism: Antony’s 360-degree spins are “art,” Onana’s goalkeeping is “bold,” and the Glazers are “just football-lover misunderstood billionaires.” (Note: They’re not.)

Mahir’s advice: “Never watch a match on an empty stomach. You need energy to scream at Maguire’s header. Only to watch the opponents cheering.” Avoid strangers: “If a Chelsea fan sits nearby, samosa them. Self-defense!” During derbies, when City scores their treble, just smirk and ask, “What color is your FA Cup?” They’ll confuse your shattered soul for enlightenment.

Silence speaks volume. After losses, Dhaka’s United fans communicate through WhatsApp stickers of Ferguson’s red face. “Words are overrated,” Mahir says. “A crying emoji says more than Roy Keane’s rants.”

People misunderstand introverts; the world misunderstands United fans. They think we’re “entitled.” We’re just … romantics. Delusional romantics.

But here’s the secret: We’re eternal optimists. We’ll celebrate 2-1 wins over Luton like trebles. We’ll argue that “Europa League Thursdays” are glamorous. And when the Glazers sell? “We’ll party … until Elon Musk rebrands Old Trafford to X Stadium.”

In the end, survival is about pride. “Dhaka’s potholes have more ambition than our midfield,” Mahir grins. “But when asked why I endure this, I say: ‘Someone must.’ Besides, Liverpool fans are so annoying.”

So, light a candle for Fergie, pour a cha for Lisandro’s ACL, and repeat after Mahir: “Next year is our year.”

“Glory Glory”? Na, bhai … cope, cope.

低门槛获奖率高!纽约时报夏季读写竞赛核心优势了解一下!获奖的核心要素是什么?

纽约时报夏季读写竞赛是低门槛、高回报的学术活动,尤其适合希望通过英文写作展示批判性思维和全球视野的学生。学生不仅能在写作中深化对世界的理解,还可以为申请名校积累差异化优势。

一、竞赛核心优势

1.免费参赛 + 含金量高

零成本参与:无需付费,仅需注册即可免费获取《纽约时报》文章资源(全年订阅费为$25,竞赛期间可免费访问25%内容)。

名校认可度高:获奖作品将发布在《纽约时报》官网,作为学术背景提升项目,对申请新闻、传媒、公共关系、社会学等专业有显著加分作用。

2.获奖率高 + 赛制友好

每周开放一次投稿:10周周期内共10轮投稿机会,允许学生反复尝试直至获奖。

奖项设置宽松

Winner:每周1位;

Runner-up:4-8名;

Honorable Mentions:6-14名。

无需复杂论证:仅需250词左右的简短读后感,重点在于表达个人见解而非学术深度。

3.低门槛 + 时间灵活

适合低年级学生:无需时事敏感度或专业背景,只需阅读并回应一篇《纽约时报》文章,撰写个人感悟即可。

时间投入少:最快1周完成,最慢3-4周打磨,适合时间紧张的学生。

4.创意形式多样化

新增视频投稿:2024年起支持提交90秒视频,鼓励学生通过视觉化表达观点,增加获奖可能性。

二、获奖关键要素

根据《纽约时报》官方评分标准及往届获奖作品分析,以下四点是脱颖而出的核心策略:

1.与个人经历深度共鸣

避免泛泛而谈:不局限于“文章写得好”“观点新颖”等表面评价,而是结合自身生活、兴趣或经历展开。

2. 展现读前与读后的思维变化

对比视角:明确说明阅读前的认知误区或态度,以及文章如何修正你的观点。

示例

阅读前认为“基因编辑技术风险极高”,阅读后意识到其在医学领域的潜力与伦理平衡的重要性。

通过文章对某社会问题的新解读,重新思考自己的立场。

3. 关联时效性与社会热点

选择热门话题:优先挑选与当前国际局势、社会争议或科技突破相关的文章(如人工智能、气候变化、公共卫生事件)。

补充独特视角:若文章以官方数据为主,可通过个人经历或当地案例提供补充视角。

示例

对一篇关于全球粮食危机的报道,结合所在地区的农业政策或社区应对措施进行分析。

4. 挖掘小众切入点

避免大众化主题:避开政治、经济等常见话题,选择冷门但具有深度的主题(如艺术、文化、小众科学领域)。

三、实战写作技巧

1.紧扣评分标准

Personal Connections(个人联系):用具体故事或经历引出文章主题。

Critical Thinking(批判性思维):提出疑问、对比不同观点或反思文章的局限性。

References to Source Material(原文引用):在文中明确标注文章标题、URL或关键段落,证明深度阅读。

Voice and Style(语言风格):保持自然流畅,避免学术化表达,展现个人声音(如幽默感、情感共鸣)。

2.优化文章结构

开头:用悬念或反问句吸引读者(例:“你是否想过,一只蜜蜂的死亡可能预示着整个生态系统的崩溃?”)。

主体:结合文章内容与个人经历,穿插具体细节(如文章中的数据、案例、图片)。

结尾:总结观点并提出行动倡议。

3.利用工具提升质量

语法检查:使用Grammarly或Word内置工具校对拼写和语法错误。

同义词替换:通过Thesaurus.com优化词汇多样性,避免重复用词。

朗读修改:大声朗读或请他人代读,发现逻辑漏洞或表达生硬之处。

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纽约时报暑期阅读写作竞赛全攻略!从参赛到获奖的完整指南

对于热爱写作的青少年而言,《纽约时报》暑期阅读写作竞赛(New York Times Summer Reading Contest)是一个值得关注的国际性赛事。今年的赛季将于6月6日正式开区!计划参赛的同学一定不要错过了!

一、赛事核心信息

竞赛时间:2025年6月6日 - 8月15日

这项创办15周年的年度赛事由《纽约时报》"The Learning Network"主办,每年6月至8月向全球13-19岁青少年开放。

从2025年6月6日起,连续10周,每周五《纽约时报》都会发布一篇博文,提出同一个问题:“本周《纽约时报》的哪些内容引起了你的关注?”你可以随时在此提交你的答案,截止日期为下周五东部时间上午9点。届时,网站将关闭该博文,并发布一篇新的博文,提出同样的问题。8月8日,将发布今年夏季的最后一个问题,开放至8月15日上午9点。

每周五美国东部时间9:00前提交不超过1500字符的文本或90秒原创视频,评审团将在次周公布优胜作品。

二、参赛操作指南

1.作品要求

每周可提交1次作品

文本类:请务必包含你所选《纽约时报》文章的完整网址或标题。

视频类:需上传至YouTube设为"未公开",请务必说出或显示您正在讨论的《时代》文章的标题。不得使用任何图像、视频片段、音乐或音效。确保我们能清晰地看到和听到您的视频。请注意光线,并尽量减少背景噪音。请勿在视频中拍摄任何其他人。

英美以外地区13-15岁学生需通过监护人/教师账户提交

提交的作品必须是原创—不接受抄袭的、或由他人创作的或由人工智能生成的参赛作品,且未经任何地方发表过。

2.时区换算

以北京时间为例:当周作品提交截止时间为周五晚21:00(夏令时)/22:00(冬令时),建议提前2小时完成提交。

三、备赛策略建议

1.时间规划

建议采用"2-1-1"节奏:

前2天:选题调研与素材收集

第3天:完成初稿

第4天:修改润色

第5天:定稿提交

2.选题技巧

优先选择具备以下特质的文章:

引发个人情感共鸣的选题

具备多维度讨论空间的话题

包含新颖观点或独特叙事角度

3.创作要点

(1)个性化表达

避免单纯复述原文,重点展现个人思考。可采用"3:7比例"结构:

30%篇幅提炼原文核心

70%篇幅延伸个人见解

(2)结构设计

推荐三段式框架:

引言:建立与原文的独特连接(如个人经历类比)
主体:展开多角度分析(建议2-3个分论点)
结语:提出建设性思考或开放性问题

(3)语言规范

在保持个人风格基础上注意:

使用学术性词汇(推荐Merriam-Webster词典)

避免俚语和网络用语

运用Grammarly检查基础语法(注意语境适配性)

四、获奖作品解析

通过研究近三年获奖作品,总结出五大成功要素:

1.视角独特性

2022年获奖者通过家族移民史解读经济报道,将宏观数据转化为微观叙事。

2.批判性思维

例如在讨论AI技术时,既指出学术诚信风险,又肯定其在教育公平中的价值。

3.情感共鸣力

优秀作品常包含真实生活细节,如用"祖母的食谱"呼应食品安全报道。

4.跨学科连接

将科技、艺术等专业知识融入社会议题分析,展现多维思考能力。

五、资源利用指南

1.资源包

往届获奖作品集

评委解析视频(YouTube频道)

2.辅助工具

Hemingway Editor:优化行文流畅度

Evernote:建立素材库

3.能力提升建议

日常可进行"3×3训练":

每周精读3篇时报长文

记录3个有深度的思考点

完成3段150字微评析

六、常见误区提醒

1.选题方面

避免选择时效性过强的突发新闻,优先考虑具有长期讨论价值的深度报道。

2.创作方面

切忌为追求独特性强行关联个人经历,确保内容衔接自然。

3.技术层面

注意字符数统计包含空格和标点,建议使用WordCounter实时监测。

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《纽约时报》夏季读写竞赛与藤校录取偏好有什么契合之处?对留学申请帮助有多大?

在快速变化的当今时代,青少年对于社会、文化、政治等领域的意识和理解日益重要。尤其是在申请美国顶尖大学的过程中,如何展示自己的学术能力和社会责任感,成为了年轻申请者们必须认真考虑的问题。《纽约时报》主办的夏季读书竞赛,作为一个持续时间最长、最简单易行的挑战,恰好为广大学生提供了一个独特的机会,去发展自己的写作水平,并向名校招生官展示个人的深度和广度。

夏季读写竞赛的录取偏好风向标作用分析

1.选题与藤校“公民责任感”的高度重合

NYT(纽约时报)报道的选题,如气候变化、教育公平、AI伦理等,与藤校(如哈佛、耶鲁、普林斯顿等)所倡导的“公民责任感”高度契合。

这些选题关注全球性挑战和社会公平问题,体现了对人类社会未来发展的深刻思考。

藤校希望培养具有全球视野和社会责任感的领导者,而NYT的选题正是这种价值观的体现。

2.鼓励主动探索与斯坦福等名校的核心标准一致

夏季读写竞赛鼓励学生主动探索,例如:

深入研究感兴趣的话题:正如评委 Pia Peterson 所说,学生可以“Google the topic”并“talk to experts”,这体现了对知识的主动追求和深入思考。

批判性思维:学生需要批判性地分析文章内容,并提出自己的见解,这正是名校所看重的批判性思维。

名校评分标准:斯坦福等名校在录取时非常重视学生的主动性和探索精神。例如,斯坦福的评分标准中就包括“主动学习”和“对知识的热情”等要素。

3.文书灵感库与社会活动指南针

个人联系与社会话题:竞赛要求学生的作品“与社会话题建立个人联系+批判分析”,这与名校文书的框架高度契合:

名校文书通常要求学生阐述个人经历与社会议题的关联,并展示其对社会的思考和贡献。

社会人群的关注:NYT优秀作品聚焦的社会人群(如弱势群体、边缘群体等),也正是名校学者关注的对象:

这体现了对社会多样性和社会公平的关注。

学生可以通过阅读这些作品,了解不同人群的生活现状和社会问题,从而更好地理解自身在社会中的位置,正如评委 Emma Weber 所说:“The more you reflect on what is going on in the world, the more you will understand your place within it.”。

4.对学生的启示

关注社会议题:学生应积极关注全球性和社会性议题,并思考其对自身和社会的意义。

培养主动学习能力:学生应培养主动探索和深入研究的能力,并尝试与专家或业内人士交流。

提升批判性思维:学生应学会批判性地分析问题,并提出独立见解。

积累文书素材:学生可以将竞赛作品作为文书素材,并结合自身经历进行创作。

参与社会活动:学生可以参考竞赛中关注的社会人群和议题,选择适合自己的社会活动,并积极参与其中。

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新手备赛纽约时报夏季读写赛的获奖备考秘籍是什么?辅导课程有推荐吗?

名校招生官在考察申请者时,极为重视他们在学术和课外活动方面的表现。参与《纽约时报》夏季读书竞赛,实际上是为自己创造了一种展示方式,能够让招生官更加全面地了解申请者的潜力与价值。

一、新手获奖备考秘籍深度解析

1.积累素材,寻找灵感

关注《纽约时报》重点栏目

The Upshot(数据分析类):

特点:提供基于数据的深度分析和趋势解读。

建议:关注数据背后的社会现象和趋势变化,思考其对个人和社会的意义。

Opinion(观点评论类):

特点:汇集各界人士对热点话题的多元观点。

建议:分析不同观点的逻辑论证和论据支持,学习如何构建强有力的论点。

Lens(摄影纪实类):

特点:通过视觉语言讲述故事,聚焦社会现实。

建议:思考照片背后的故事和情感,并尝试将视觉元素融入写作中。

Podcasts(音频故事类):

特点:以音频形式呈现故事,更具沉浸感。

建议:关注音频的叙事技巧和情感表达,并尝试将其运用到写作中。

运用“5W1H”((Who, What, When, Where, Why, How))拆解优秀报道。

2.针对性写作训练

限时写作训练

设定时间限制:每周进行30分钟限时写作,模拟比赛环境,培养时间管理能力和快速构思能力。

四段式结构:

论点(Thesis):明确提出文章的核心观点。

证据(Evidence):提供具体数据、案例分析或专家观点来支持论点。

反论(Counterargument):预见并回应可能的反对意见或质疑。

回应(Response):对反论进行反驳或进一步论证,强化自身观点。

寻求专业导师指导

语言润色:专业导师可以帮助你优化语言表达,使文章更加地道和学术化。

3.选题要有技巧

综合考虑以下因素选择文章

时效性:

建议:选择发布时间在72小时内的文章,此时热点讨论尚未饱和,更容易找到独特的切入点。

工具:利用NYT官网的“Most Popular”栏目实时追踪热门话题。

个人化:

建议:选择与自身经历、兴趣或价值观存在隐性关联的文章。

优势:文章更容易融入个人思考和情感,使作品更具个人色彩和感染力。

争议性:

建议:优先选择带有矛盾性数据或对立观点的内容。

优势:更容易激起讨论度,并为你的文章提供丰富的论证素材。

二、我们的课程亮点

1.一对一个性化辅导

深入了解学生:课程通过一对一的形式,深入了解每位学生的写作习惯和薄弱环节。

精准指导:基于对学生写作习惯和问题的了解,老师可以提供个性化的指导方案。

2.每周课程安排

科学的学习节奏,过于频繁的课程可能导致学生疲劳,而过少的课程则可能影响学习效果。

定期的课程安排确保了持续的反馈和及时的调整。

3.沉浸式英文授课环境

有助于学生培养英文思维逻辑,并习惯于用英文进行思考和表达。

精准的表达方式:通过持续的英文输入和输出,学生可以提高语言表达的准确性和流畅性。

4.结构化写作训练体系

系统性强化写作能力:课程采用结构化的训练体系,从以下几个方面进行系统性的强化:

选题立意:帮助学生学会如何选择合适的题目并确定文章的主题。

逻辑构建:引导学生进行逻辑思维训练,并学会如何构建清晰的文章结构。

5.批改与深度点评

深入的点评:除了纠正错误,老师还会对学生的作业进行深度点评:

改进建议:针对学生的不足之处,提供具体的改进建议和写作技巧指导。

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